The Dutch form follows the pattern
a. b. a. b. a. a. c. c. d. x. d. e. f. e
It is a unique form because it is made up of two sestets interrupted by a rhyming couplet. The beginning sestet allows the speaker to lead into the poem gently, then to create a turning point with the middle couplet, and to finish strong with the closing sestet.
What follows is an example taken from my own work with this form.
Sonnet L
In dreams do I dream of thee, calm in age,
Majestic ‘n foreign beauty and tone o’ skin;
Ever to pierce my heart with thy visage,
With eyes shaded with bold, thou is akin
T’ my taste, and to guide my artist’s image
With thy gentle hand; a reel t’ block damage.
Thy method to retool my aperture,
To add colored paint t’ that caricature.
A possible future that thou takes t’ thread
Through a projector that so yields us hope,
Against all odds of the lens made of lead;
Thou strongly smites all hindrance to a halt,
With thy skill of independence in youth;
Thou does mend each of my expanding faults.
~ Ryan Tunison
Comments on the structure as well as more examples are welcome and can be posted below.
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